ahahahahaha i totally did and yes i totally forgot about that >w< now that i look at it D: well maybe i'll add it some other time =3=
anyways...
hahahahaha what you think dude ?? should i keep it or do i have to delete this one?
<=3
NOTE: just in case nobody notices, mafer belongs to if you want to see more about her and his comic, go to his page dude, whatca waiting for? go go go!!!
Compared tot the original stuff, you have done some amazing work. The shape of the belly and boobs is fantastic. The nipples and belly button showing too is fantastic. The clothes coloring is very sickly but I love the ripped look on it. The bashed knees say she been on her knees a lot stuffing herself. I like that addition. I like the shape of her face and the cheeks and eyes are well done. Her hair is very well done but too similar to Korra's hair from Avatar. In Conclusion, You have the perfect shape and look but the coloring needs a bit of improvement. Very good Job in total
You forgot her hairpins, her papa gave those to her you know?
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oh you noticed i forgot those T___________________________T io'll add then later... why is mayo so pleased about it? and rafy you're drroling my table D:
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